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     <a href="/repos">demo.gothub.org/repos</a>.
     </p>
     <p>
-    Note that the <b>disable authentication</b> directive is used, as web
-    servers on the Game of Trees Hub are configured with authentication enabled
-    by default. Without this, viewing the website would require users to be
+    The <b>disable authentication</b> directive is used because web servers on
+    the Game of Trees Hub are configured with authentication enabled by
+    default.  Without this, viewing the website would require users to be
     logged in.
     </p>
     <p>
@@ -107,9 +107,9 @@
     <p>
     Just like with the <em>gotsys</em> repository, three new repositories are
     declared that can be read and written to by the <em>flan_hacker</em> user.
-    Note that <em>public_repo_b</em> also allows the <em>anonymous</em> user to
-    clone the repository, but not to send new changes to it, as it is declared
-    with the <b>ro</b> mode (read-only). Repositories that are readable by the
+    The repository <em>public_repo_b</em> also allows the <em>anonymous</em>
+    user to clone it, but not to send new changes to it, as it is declared with
+    the <b>ro</b> mode (read-only). Repositories that are readable by the
     <em>anonymous</em> user will include a clone url in the summary of the
     repository when browsing it with a web browser.
     </p>
@@ -195,9 +195,9 @@
     }
     </pre>
     <p>
-    Note that in this case, visitors won't be presented with instructions on
-    how to authenticate, as it is expected from the permitted user to know how
-    to do so.
+    In this case, visitors won't be presented with instructions on how to
+    authenticate, as it is expected from the permitted user to know how to do
+    so.
     </p>
     <p>
     The <b>permit</b> and <b>deny</b> directives can be set for all